Research Proposal Feedback

Wow, so apparently my research proposal was better than I had thought. Maybe writing is getting easier for me, but I felt like I had put alot of time into it but was unsure of the format since it was my first research proposal. And after looking at the comments, I see how there are several places where it could be worded better. Also, I did not clearly state what I was asking for, which I plan to better incorporate when I revise it again. I am excited though that there are only minor revisions needed. Hmmm, maybe I just overworried about it since there wasn't any big problems I saw (or little ones for that matter)-